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  1. 2b108c5ff0f112b33ed83a266e60bb09
    Roland Manager

    clear_private_data.welcome

    "Security and privacy are important. With just a few clicks you can clear all saved browser data."

    "... are so important ..." has an ironic touch in English. Example of a dialog:
    "I can't do that now, I have to polish my fingernails."
    "Oh, that is so (best with a long "sooo") important - I can perfectly understand that you don't want to do it."

    datas: Data is already plural or an undetermined number, so no s at the end. A single piece of data would be a "datum" or an "entry" or whatever else fits in the context.

  2. Bd84f7c679c7c3937407c89b1ba2f29e
    Grch Manager

    'so important' or 'crucial'. Which one do you prefer?

    datas should be data. I will be fixed it.

  3. 26999_magruf
    Magruf Manager

    ""so important" would be nice.

  4. Bd84f7c679c7c3937407c89b1ba2f29e
    Grch Manager

    Roland, I got the situation now. so should be removed. I prefer 'crucial' word instead of just 'important'.

  5. 2b108c5ff0f112b33ed83a266e60bb09
    Roland Manager

    "very important"

    or, in a matter of fact way:

    "important"
    nothing else. They are important, they are not unimportant - there is no need to say more.

    Do not add the "so" if you do not mean the opposite of important.

    "crucial" would be fine too.

  6. 2b108c5ff0f112b33ed83a266e60bb09
    Roland Manager

    change "a few click" to "a few clicks" and we have a deal :)

  7. 26999_magruf
    Magruf Manager

    all done :) thanks


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