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  1. When you activated protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you visit any webpage incluedes unsecure contents.

    When is temporal, not conditional.

    Instead of:
    "When you activated protection,"
    use:
    "If you activate the protection,"
    or:
    "After you have activated the protection,"

    Instead of:
    "Vivaldi will warn you if you visit any webpage incluedes unsecure contents."
    use:
    "Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure contents."
    or:
    "Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit a malicious or insecure website."
    or:
    "Vivaldi will warn you off from visiting an insecure or malicious website."

    (It would be too late if it would warn you after you are already there, so it warns you when you try to visit it. Additionally it warns only about whole sites, not single pages.)

  2. Thanks, changed.


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  1. When you activated protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you visit any webpage incluedes unsecure contents.
    When you activated protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you visit any webpage incluedes unsecure contents.

    When you activated protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you visit any webpage incluedes unsecure contents.

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  2. If you activate the protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure contents.
    If you activate the protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure contents.

    If you activate the protection, Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure contents.

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  3. If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.
    If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.

    If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.

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  4. If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.
    If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.

    If you keep the protection activated (recommended), Vivaldi will warn you if you try to visit any website that includes insecure content.

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