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  1. clear_private_data.welcome

    "Security and privacy are important. With just a few clicks you can clear all saved browser data."

    "... are so important ..." has an ironic touch in English. Example of a dialog:
    "I can't do that now, I have to polish my fingernails."
    "Oh, that is so (best with a long "sooo") important - I can perfectly understand that you don't want to do it."

    datas: Data is already plural or an undetermined number, so no s at the end. A single piece of data would be a "datum" or an "entry" or whatever else fits in the context.

  2. 'so important' or 'crucial'. Which one do you prefer?

    datas should be data. I will be fixed it.

  3. ""so important" would be nice.

  4. Roland, I got the situation now. so should be removed. I prefer 'crucial' word instead of just 'important'.

  5. "very important"

    or, in a matter of fact way:

    "important"
    nothing else. They are important, they are not unimportant - there is no need to say more.

    Do not add the "so" if you do not mean the opposite of important.

    "crucial" would be fine too.

  6. change "a few click" to "a few clicks" and we have a deal :)

  7. all done :) thanks


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  1. Security and privacy are so important. With just few click, you can clear all datas.
    Security and privacy are so important. With just few click, you can clear all datas.

    Security and privacy are so important. With just few click, you can clear all datas.

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  2. Security and privacy are crucial. With just few click, you can clear all data.
    Security and privacy are crucial. With just few click, you can clear all data.

    Security and privacy are crucial. With just few click, you can clear all data.

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  4. Security and privacy are crucial. With just a few clicks, you can clear all data.
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    Security and privacy are crucial. With just a few clicks, you can clear all data.

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    Security and privacy are crucial. With just a few clicks, you can clear all data.

    Security and privacy are crucial. With just a few clicks, you can clear all data.

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