Diaspora/Diaspora

Discussion started 11 June, 2015 16:12, with no comments.

Johan Öhlin Swedish Translator with all proofreading rights 11 June, 2015 16:12

"You can change the aspects they are in right there."

I had to read this sentence a couple of times before I understood it. Just "there" would be better than "right there", and "which aspects" rather than "the aspects".

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